The only way to reduce drug abuse is to legalise the substances and bring them under control. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Presently, the drug abuse rate has been increased rapidly in

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decade

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. To deal with

this

problem

, some

people

believe that to make the substances legal and control them under the laws is only one solution. Even though I agree that bringing all the

drugs

under control is

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, it is my belief that there are certain effective solutions to

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which

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need to be considered.

This

essay will outline the reasons for my opinion. There are various advantages to consider about controlling the

medicines

. The

first

and most significant

is

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reducing

the

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illegal trading. The reason for

this

is not only the shops like pharmaceutical stores need the license by the

government

agency for selling the

medicines

but

also

people

need the permission document by the doctor for buying the

drugs

. Apart from

this

, another point is the

government

can access

to

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substances information in all medicine.

This

leads to reducing the dangerous chemical which may add illegally by

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the manufacturer

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manufacturer

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.

Although

there are numerous benefits to control the drug, I consider

that is

alternative

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solution. The most essential of which is education.

People

especially

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children are carefree about using the

medicines

,

therefore

sometimes the

drugs

may cause negative

effect

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effects

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to

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their health

such

as an addiction. Nowadays, there are many ways

such

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in

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social media,

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the champaign

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champaign

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of the

government

and teaching at school to educate

people

about the side effect of using

medicines

in

wrong

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the wrong

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way or how to use the

drugs

properly.

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,

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education is the effective way to solve the

problem

,

people

need to

careful

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to not abuse the

drugs

by themselves. In conclusion, while there is a variety

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of advantage

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advantage

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advantages

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for controlling the

medicines

, I believe that there are other solutions to handle the

problem

. If both

people

and

government

realize the

problem

of drug abuse exists,

then

it can be solved quickly and effectively.