Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Against the backdrop of the interaction between countries, travelling abroad became more common for everyone and air
travel
got more convenient with the advent of cheap
flights
.
On the other hand
, some argue that taking into account the environmental impacts triggered by air
travel
, it must be more expensive to deter people from enjoying the
travel
casually. I can neither support nor opposition the given statement for the following reasons. Turning to the environmental concerns, it is fact that air
travel
gives a certain negative
impact
on the
environment
, especially due to the carbon emission during the
flight
. According to the Ministry of
Environment
in Japan, the CO2 emission yielded by one
flight
from Tokyo to Singapore is equivalent to the destruction of 25km2 of forests. Given that there are two
flights
per day, the damages on the nature are significantly considerable.
Besides
this
, in response to the increase in the number of
flights
as more people take the advantage of cheap
flights
, it is required the expansion of runways and airport terminals that leads to deforestation and ecosystem destruction.
Thus
, it is reasonable to set a higher price for the
flights
to prevent people use the
flight
frequently concerning the
impact
on nature.
However
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though, the airline
companies
are not merely increasing the number of cheap
flights
to promote casual travelling but as well as they introduce some preventative measures against the environmental
impact
.
For instance
, one of the most famous airline
companies
in Japan called ANA (All Nippon Airways) donates 5% of its revenue per
flight
for the plantation of trees.
This
is known as a part of CSR (corporate social responsibility) that seeks the opportunities of compensation against a negative
impact
on the socio-economics including the
environment
which yielded through the company's business activities.
Moreover
, against the backdrop of the development of technologies, a company
such
as Boeing launches some new aircraft that have less emission of CO2. Those aircraft are proactively adopted by airline
companies
these days. To summarize, I do not take any position, rather stand at neutral towards the statement because the
companies
introduce several countermeasures against the concerns, while it is too fact that more
flights
give more damages to the
environment
.
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Example:

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  • Finally
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  • Democratic travel
  • Global diversity
  • Economic benefits
  • Service sector
  • Educational travel
  • International relationships
  • Carbon emissions
  • Global warming
  • Climate crisis
  • Overtourism
  • Infrastructure
  • Cultural heritage
  • Sustainable aviation
  • Carbon offset
  • Global inequality
  • Airline industry
  • Economic downturn
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