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A longer prison term as a way of punishing those who break the law is not as good as other method. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Imposing sentences is regarded as an effective method of punishing
offenders
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 it can deter crimes, I believe that there are other approaches that can result in better outcomes.
Community
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 service can be treated as a better way of reforming criminals. Doing
community
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 services
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 as cleaning equipment of a
community
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 can help
offenders
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 develop working skills and achieve a sense of responsibility. Meanwhile,
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 experience can give them a feeling of working and living like normal citizens which can prevent criminals continue to commit offences when they were released.
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, a long term
prison
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 isolates
offenders
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 from society may not achieve the same result. Providing formal education and vocational techniques is another method. Some juvenile
offenders
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 and
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-time
offenders
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 may commit offences because of the lack of judgement and unmatured minds.
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,
prison
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 staff should provide lectures to
offenders
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 and help them develop career advancement.
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, specialist staff can teach them knowledge of basic subjects or practical skills
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 as cooking and building. By
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 means, they could accept equal education or job opportunities after they leave
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 and are unwilling to hurt other people.
On the other hand
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, a long
prison
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 term can be the most powerful approach to prevent crimes for some
offenders
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 who commit multiple times of crimes. Reoffenders are likely to pose a threat to public properties and citizens’ safety repeatedly. In order to protect the well-being of innocent citizens, they need long-term supervision conducted by the justice system. In conclusion, despite sending
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 to
prison
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 is an efficient way to reduce the offence rate, I believe that methods
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 as
community
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 service and education which can better educate
offenders
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 should be taken into consideration.
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