Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in education of children. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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in Thai society
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frequently debated in the media.
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more and more people put forward
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the
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that
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should not give
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, others criticize
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and argue that
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are crucial in
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system of
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. Both
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of these contrasting views be analyzed and
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my opinion is given in
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essay. In my own perspective, I would side with the
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that
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should not be received
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from teachers. On the one hand, there are good grounds for arguing that teachers ought not to put any
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their
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. The principal reason is that children will have a lot of stress and depression, due to the fact that
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use much time to finish and knowledge to solve the problems.
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, we always see the news about the depression of high-school
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which may bring them to suicide. A
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point is that children ought to spend time
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other activities which can improve their life skills and make them happy more than doing many tasks. Yet, other people put forward the
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that giving
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a benefit
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on
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. It is able to give them a hand to practice and review the lessons, owing to the fact that they must use a lot of knowledge in
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class with their critical thinking to solve the problems.
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, all
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can catch up together by doing
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in order to check
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, especially behind-room
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. Having considered both sides of the argument, it seems to me that both sides of the argument have their advantages.
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, on balance, I am inclined to believe that the benefit of children should not be received any
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from teachers clearly outweigh the benefit of assignment has a significant role in
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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