In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Traditionally, A lot of

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often tell their

children

that the way to succeed

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in something

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is adequate trying and practice more. Telling

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to enhance and

also

be some drawbacks.

First

of all, it is benefit say to the

children

to try more. It can lead them to develop themselves in many skills. They will think about

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and have a passion to deal with

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problems. Like learning mathematic is difficult for a student. Many times, they fail in

this

subject but if their parents encourage and tell them to try enough they will pay more attention

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that subject and

then

get a high score.

Also

, when they do not give up and become a patient person it will

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in

the

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future career.

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well-known actor

also

practice

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practices

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their performance in the

long-term

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. They increase a tolerance to train their acting skill for incredible shows.

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younger

children

who want

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goal

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.

On the other hand

, there are disadvantages to hear that sentence. Many

those

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who

are keep

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trying but

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remain

unsuccess

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. Failure is led a

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of

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the problems

such

as

children

stop to improve themselves and abandon their goals and passion in their life. Some of them do not trust that they have

ability

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to achieve something.

Further

,

children

will not believe a person that told them to try hard.

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, In China, the younger has not

follow

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their parents because they usually force them more learning and get much more

stressful

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. So, the parents were ignored by them. To conclude, while it is helpful to say that to succeed they should try difficult, sometimes it will

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be disadvantaged

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disadvantages

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disadvantaged

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as a result

. The

children

have to decide by themselves.