University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studied. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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Studying in other countries around the world is becoming extremely popular among many university students. Despite
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will far from their family, they will
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receive significant
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experiences that will
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helpful
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their careers.
This
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essay will discuss why the
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of studying
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do in fact outweigh the negative. The main benefit of studying abroad is that students will have
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experiences that will improve themselves that impossible if they had have only studied in their own countries. Being in another country leads people
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an unfamiliar situation that they would learn about how to deal with
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condition.
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, When I studied in Singapore
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ten years old, I
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with new unknown cultures that I have never met before.
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, I had to adapt myself
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survive
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. But, in the
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I could overcome a difficult moment and acquired enhancement.
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, it is developed you to better efficient person.
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, the challenges that
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will face while overseas was far from their family. They will stay with
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a host
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family and unfamiliar accommodation and
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the family
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will worry about their children
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and activities.
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, while studying in Singapore I really miss my mom and sister in Thailand. It was a sad moment and I
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been crying for two weeks.
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, In the
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student always struggle with the languages that sometimes they never
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before
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as Singapore, people in
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speak only English or Chinese but they
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speak Tamil which is not widespread in the world. In conclusion, expanding of studying abroad for the college students. It
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benefit
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to provide an experience that you cannot find in daily
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than
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the drawback
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that your family worry about your
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in another country.
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