Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

School should provide

art

subjects in the curriculum because it can develop many

students

’

skill

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skills

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and

also

benefits for multi-skilled

students

in order to try new learning.

This

essay totally agreed that

art

is able to develop

confidence

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the confidence

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and concentration of the

students

. On the one hand,

students

have more confidence when they study

art

.

This

is because

art

lesson always has some activity about performance in

front

of the

class

.

For instance

, in Thai dramas,

students

study

about

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thai dancing and display the show in

front

of the

class

.

Consequently

, they will have more confidence and they will not be afraid of

presentation

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in

front

of the

class

as well.

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reason, they can have more concentration to do many things for a long

time

without breaking.

This

is because

art

is

the

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subject

which

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that

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requires delicacy

skill

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skills

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and focusing on the work.

For example

, when they do homework

in

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the topic of

watercolor

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watercolour

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; they must have high

focusing

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on their work and be aware to fill the

color

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colour

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carefully in order to prevent the mixture of

color

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which lead to destroying of their works.

On the other hand

, some

students

may think that studying

art

is particularly a waste

time

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of time

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because they think

art

subjects have no benefits to them.

For instance

, providing that they want to be an accountant--which does not require any

art

skill--but focusing on the math calculation; they may think that the

time

studying

art

should be done by the

time

practising calculation

skill

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. In summary, the school curriculum ought to provide

art

subjects because there are many benefits from

students

; they have more self-esteem to perform or present information in

front

of the

class

;

moreover

, they

also

have more concentration to focus on work for a long

time

and delicacy to do many things carefully.