Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is widely believed that studying foreign languages in primary schools or
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is more effective than a secondary
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.In my opinion,I will give two benefits and some drawbacks to
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,learning a foreign
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is helpful to improve
children
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's brain,if they can learn a
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language
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early while they were young
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because
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the best time to learn new things,they are able to remember a vocabulary faster than older
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.In the same
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children
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will absorb a pronunciation in the right way,
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understand lifestyle and culture of a different country.
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,
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will get
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education easily in the future,
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as top-rank high
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or top rank university in their country,because nowadays
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is the main
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around the world or billion people use
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for everyday life.
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,for the future in the careers
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the
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will useful to salary,mostly company require an
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score.
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score is a guarantee to salary.
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a drawback to be considered.A
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that have
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programs or international
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in some country is very expensive,and obligation will go to their parents.
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,
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would learn very hard or much homework as you know
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did not have only subject in
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. In conclusion,there is
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have a lot of benefit for their future and their careers,and the way to get success
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get some obligations in their life.
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