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Many people who dropout of school are more successful than those who complete their studies. Why does this happen? What does it require to be successful?

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Nowadays,few people
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from
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 their education
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 early age and become highly qualified
where as
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 the majority of students
they
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who
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 complete their studies are less established than the others.In the following paragraph,
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 intend to divulge my statements and some predictions for success.
Firstly
,it is undeniable that very little amount of people have lavishing lifestyle.
This
 is because they have
interest
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on
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their
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 carrier they chose to take after leaving
education
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 system.
Furthermore
,young teens can work on their skills which are useful for
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growth in the sector.They
also
 have the opportunity to try different streams and to put
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 of their skillet and get the
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fortunate
further
 outcomes. It is irrefutable that,some situations in their life
such
 as family problems and money crisis can make them mutually very strong at that small age,
consequently
,they have the strong motive in their mind to
acheive
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achieve
 something innovative and earn money for the living.The determination to set a goal and reach that
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 young age.
On the other hand
,the most important factor to achieve success is by
hardwork
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hard work
 and focus.these provide the path for
the
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 successful lifestyle,
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where as
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 if we
workhard
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work hard
 and stay focused on the things we do
it
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we
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 can
acheive
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achieve
 drastic changes in
carrier
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our carrier
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 and life
aswell
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as well
.
For instance
,the head of many hotels named
oyo
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 in
india
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India
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 had become
wealthy
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a wealthy
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 person in
short
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a short
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 spam. To conclude,it consists of many factors to be a successful person neither educated or dropout from school can achieve
wounderful
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wonderful
 things if they have
determination
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the determination
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 and hardworking skills in his life.
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