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The result of a survey of children's activities the first day of shows the culture and leisure activities that the boys participating in whereas the shows the activities in which the girls participate

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The pie chart
represent's
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represents
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 the outdoor & and Indoor
activities
 Participating by the
boys
 and
girls
 respectively Overall we can see that
boys
 and
girls
 participating in Outdoor
activities
. Are almost
same
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on the other hand
, it clearly shows that listening to
Musie
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Music
 is
same
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 in
boys
 as well as in
Girls
. For
Boys
 Basketball, soccer and Skateboarding Made Up The Figure of 34 %. In comparison to the outdoor
activities
 for
Girls
, which are Dancing, Netball, and
Gymnastic
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gymnastics
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, makes almost the same portion of 53%.From for
boys
 the maximum number of
participatients
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participants
participations
 participating in Outdoor Activity Is Basketball at 26.1% and almost same for the maximum participants taking part in outdoor activity is dancing which is just 1% more than the
boys
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boy's
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 maximum participants outdoor activity. In the same way, from
Boys
 Participating in Skateboarding and For the
Girls
 participating In Gymnastics was The Same For Both At 11%.
On the other hand
, the indoor
activities
 for both
boys
 and
Girls
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girls
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 were
same
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the same
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,which are Computer games, reading and listening
music
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.
Although
 from the given chart we can clearly see that the
boys
 participating in computer Games
is
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 little more than the twice in Number of
girls
 participating in computer games. But the
Girls
 participating in the Reading is 10 times more than the
boys
 participating in reading, which is 21% And 2% Respectively.
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