some people believe that it is good to share as much informations as possible in scientific research, bussiness and acaemic world. Others believe that some informations is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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communication between research groups has become a key issue. While, few people think

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strenghtned

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strengthened

in the future, others oppose it. In

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arguments

of both positions, and explain why I feel

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better communication have more

significiant

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significant

advantages. As

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modern researches will have become more advanced, the produced information will have more value than ever before. Some of these

knowledges

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knowledge

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are not only valuable, but

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could be dangerous if they become public too early.

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, gene editing is one of the most booming

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of biology. There are lots of results, which could give

also

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for many

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illnesses

illness

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but could

also

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cause

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damage

in living organisations, in case of not proper usage. While the ethical conversation has not closed, and there are no proper rules about the usage of these

technices

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, they should

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in secret.

On the other hand

, a widely and freely available database about these scientific researches, could

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several advantages. In the case of COVID-19, the strong communication, between researchers has helped that, the nations should not wait years for the vaccines.

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,

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of information could

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ensure, that nobody doing any dangerous research in

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field. In conclusion,

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the information about the recent scientific researches is absolutely essential to make

this

field more

successfull

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successful

successfully

and ensure that they follow a legal and ethical way. Maybe in the

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we will reach that goal.