At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages and disadvantages.

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world

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it is occurring

this

phenomenon. The number of elderly persons is higher than young adults. In my

opinion

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this

situation is bringing more disadvantages than advantages. Analyzing consequences in

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economy

, jobs, as well as in

health

and its administration, we can support

this

idea. Starting

for

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the global

economy

and jobs, we can look that older

people

have many

spends

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that they can't afford with their income as retired.

As a result

, the government must give them a

few

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helps

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.

This

support comes from the tax which

are

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paid by the actives workers, young adults. If young

people

are less than older

people

,

this

will create a unbalance, affecting the

economy

. Another important point is the

health

, as well as the situation for the cost of living, the cost of

health

's retired persons, will

increased

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if

this

part of the population growth.

Moreover

, if the young adults, active workers are less

then

, the government must support the

health

of

this

retired population affecting the balance in the

economy

. In conclusion, the

economy

in general needs a balance between active and retired workers

for

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be

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balanced. If there is a larger number of older

people

than adult young, there will be too

much

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disadvantages.