Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

People have many different views about the youth make their own decisions about every

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of their life that lead a society of individuals who just

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of their demand. While some argue that

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should have the right to decide what things will influence them, I believe that it is essential for

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to make their own choices in life with

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from their

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. On the one hand,

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will become selfish people who just

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what they want or they like. As the

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did not receive the instruction from adults to teach them how to share their toys or food with others.

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,

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should guide their

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to be more generous or

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about poor people.

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,

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can choose what fruits they want for dessert, but

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should teach them

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their food with other

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.

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, when

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make their own decisions about matters around them that help

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to be more independent. The youth will be proud of themselves because they have the right to choose or reject things that might not be suitable for them.

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,

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will learn how to be responsible for their own choices. To give an example,

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choose a kind of

fruits

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that looks good but when

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try it, they do not like it. At

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time,

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have to eat

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fruit because of not wasting food. In conclusion, it is important for

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to make their own decisions in their

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and

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should support them to take responsibility

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their

choise

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choice

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or how to share and

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others.