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Please outline your immediate plans upon returning home and your longer term career goals.

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I really thanks in advance all of involving individuals in the Chevening program for taking me a great opportunity to studying a master in the UK.
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 essay will indicate that the three steps of the planned consequences after the postgraduate courses including an immediate plan, a middle-term plan and the ultimate goal.
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, I will apply for a business international management role of an international company in Thailand after finishing immediately postgraduate.
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 is the short-term target that I will utilize effectively with all of the management skills and fluent communication. Whereas, the relationship-building skills still remain and gently make a new network in a new business society with the high potential groups. Over the few-year periods,
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 will be a middle-term purpose that I will apply for joining with a larger international company rather than the previous firm.
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 stage will be enlarged both of the career success targeted to be a senior or chief of an international role and the expansion of the powerful communities. For the ultimate goal, I will be hoping that I would like to be one of the businesswomen in the international trades, influencing widely to these sectors with a great performance.
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, those positive consequences will be appealing to many investors and business owners coming to expand their profession in Thailand. I believe that my country is still ready on the side of many multi-skilled labourers including a lot of natural resources. In the
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 decade years, those are my intention to be a part of making more employment with higher average income distribution and supporting a better life quality of all citizens. In my perspective, the growth at the country level will not only require a large amount of investment and government operations but
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 need a real leader with the right direction including the good arrangements of many private sectors.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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