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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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 suggestion in various aspects, in the following paragraphs the reason to support my opinion will be outlined. It is undeniable that criminal cases have increased a lot in
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 to evaluate and analyze the case correctly. To sum up, the law and
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