Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. to what extent do you agree?

According to some individuals youngsters are

adversly

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adversely

influenced by experiencing the contents related to actors and actresses captured by

media

.

However

, I partially agree with

this

notion and the reasons for my partial disagreement are discussed in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, When the luxurious lifestyle of

celebrities

captured by

media

channels

are

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exposed to youngsters, they are more likely to get fascinated by it.

This

fascination encourages them to shop expensive brands, possess valuable assets which are sometimes unaffordable for them and copy the same fashion.

As a result

,

this

desire to look like their ideals makes them squander the money and they deviate from their primary objectives

such

as education.

For instance

, a teenage fashion icon and a pop star Justin Bieber was often captured by

media

which lead my teenagers to carry the same outfit and hairstyle that they would end up spending the majority of their time in front of the mirror.

Hence

, youngsters are destructively impacted when

media

captures

celebrities

and their lifestyles.

On the other hand

, not always

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children adapt to copy the

celebrities

captured by

media

,

sometime

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this

exposure motivates them to work hard enough in their life that

such

expensive and luxurious life can be achieved.

For instance

, a famous Indian actor Nawaz comes from a poor background who always used to watch all the news related to his favourite ideals and

instead

of trying to pretend like them and look rich, he worked hard enough that today he is a celebrity in Bollywood.

Hence

, the

celebrities

captured by

media

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also

motivates their true followers to work enough to achieve success. Conclusively,

although

in a desire to look rich like their ideals, children may achieve a temporary satisfaction and distract them from their studies

such

celebrities

content captured by

media

can certainly raise their motivation level to achieve success in their life.