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In some countries, young people are living in richer and healthier condition but less happy. What are the reasons? What might be done to solve this issue?

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The young generation is highly influenced by modern technology which makes their
life
 more difficult. There is no denying that the younger generation around the world is sad, despite living a luxurious lifestyle. Let us discuss the reasons and solutions to
this
 problem in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
Firstly
, busy work or
life
 schedule of the
parents
 or family members can be the main reason for the unhappiness. In most rich families, the
parents
 can not focus on their children because of the busy work schedule.
This
also
 leads to depression, as at a young age
child
 needs
parents
 guidance, attention and love to deal with world problems.
Secondly
, technology has replaced family
time
 with social media. These days, youngsters spend most of their useful
time
 on social networking, which can misguide them, and lead to sorrow.
Furthermore
, to solve the issue of dejection, schools and
parents
 should pay full attention to the
child
.
Parents
 should take out certain hours from work and spend that
time
 with their children and listen to them. They should
also
 limit the use of phones and other devices at home. In schools, knowledge regarding depression, cyber safety, and the right use of
time
 should be provided.
This
 will not only help young students to tackle difficulties but
also
 will make their
life
 happy and easy. In conclusion, the young people who live in luxurious and disease-free lifestyles are unhappy because of a number of reasons which could be limitless use and influence of technology on the
child
 or less attention from family, but the schools and the
parents
 should focus on the young
child
 to make
child
's
life
 happier.
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