Topic : Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Nowadays, in many countries,
land
can
devided
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divided
to
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many
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any
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kind
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kinds
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of
land
suchas
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such as
developed and developed areas. The
skyscrapper
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skyscraper
skyscrapers
may
built
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be built
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for a lot of
people
in some city that has limited
land
, while the others give their population a house with huge
area
aroud
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around
it. In the following paragraph, both of
these solution
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will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. It is true to say that in some cities give their
people
housing
area
with a high building
such
as apartment and condominium which is come with
limited
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a limited
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area
in the room.
This
housing
area
usually
be
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is
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seen in the capital or industry district that
land
always has a remarkedly high price, so
this
is the best solution to tackle
this
problem.
Moreover
, when a huge number of
people
stay
wihh
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with
each other, the civilizations will happen there
such
as community malls, markets and other a
coutless
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countless
facilities.
On the other hand
, other cities which is
undeveloped
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the undeveloped
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city or rural has the
land
that price is low, so they can provide their
people
accommodation
area
with
large
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a large
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house and some
surounded
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surrounded
land
.
In addition
, most of
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population
populatin
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in
this
area
has
occupaton
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occupation
which is related to agriculture, so
enormous
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an enormous
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area
should
provided
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be provided
provide
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to the
people
who live in the undeveloped areas. In conclusion, both of solutions can tackle the
poblems
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problems
and give appropriately
life style
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lifestyle
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that
match
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matches
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with their
live
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life
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