More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest.

Nowadays, one of the rigorous challenges confronting the world is

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obesity in

children

. Especially, it is increasingly becoming prevalent in affluent countries. There are various reasons

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frustrating tendency that will be highlighted in

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essay along with some alternatives which may be implemented to alleviate

this problems

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.

To begin

with, there is a diverse

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of causes that youngsters are becoming overweight.

However

, in my view, one of the prominent factors of

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is

sedentary

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lifestyle. As an illustration of

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,in

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generation

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more adolescents would rather play computer games rather than doing physical activities.

Hence

, an inactive lifestyle contributes to the fatness in little ones. A

further

possible reason

of

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this

trade is eating disorders. As it is known, overconsumption of fast foods which is high in fat, sugar and salt have a direct impact on our health.

As a result

, it more likely gives rise to gaining weight. When it comes to solutions to

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problems. One of the significantly important

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to get rid of

this

is having a nutritious diet. The more

children

observe

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healthy diet the more they will be healthy.

In addition

, engaging with some types of sports probably will assist them to get rid of

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excess weight. In

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case, parents are more responsible, as they have to create all these surroundings to encourage their

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. So that,

children

have to be supervised by their parents in order to achieve a

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balance

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life. To sum up, obesity in

children

is a huge problem nowadays and there are possible

sollutions

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solutions

to implement.