whoever controls the media also controls people's opinions and attitudes and little can be done to rectify this. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

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Technology has been developing for many years.

People

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who use social

media

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have been increasing every day. Whoever controls the

media

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also

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check individual’s brains and behaviours.

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, they can correct

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circumstance. Some

people

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believe that

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situation can create bad effects while others think that they do not agree with

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opinion. I strongly agree that social

media

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can affect strongly human’s life.

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with, using phone applications can create some problems for teenagers.

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, if a child uses the internet, her brain development can be slow. Maybe when

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girl is 6 years old, she starts to talk.

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, parents have to be careful that it can be possible.

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this

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, some humans strongly believe that the internet is harmful to the young.

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, some applications and whoever controls the

media

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can control individuals’ opinions.

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, there is an application and its name is Tweeter. According to most

people

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, it involves terrible news and when a person searches

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news, he feels very depressive and

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situation affects his life

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as he does not want to do anything from now.

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, according to researches, some app owners do

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on purpose because they want individuals to use their apps more. To sum up, technology has evolved and with

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some problems have arisen some

people

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have been severely affected by them, while others have continued their lives normally. I agree that it has taken a serious place in our lives and has made a bad impression.

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