Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The vast majority of people tend to believe that

university

education

is one of the most important things for

students

, which allow them to consider the best working options in the

future

.

However

, there are some people who believe that

education

could be beneficial in different aspects of living. The following essay will discuss

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both point of

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in

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. On the one hand, there are many

students

who are convinced that the main goal of higher

education

is

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getting

a better work

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in the

future

.

This

though has been generally accepted by

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society and business, as many companies hire staff who have obtained a certain degree.

For instance

, it is common that huge international companies

such

as Unilever, Mars or P&G recruit new staff who have obtained their bachelor degree. As a consequence, there are many

students

who care involved only

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academic

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experience

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but do not attend

to

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extracurricular activities.

On the other hand

, there are another group of people who believe that

university

studies give a wider opportunity for

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future

career.

Firstly

,

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university

studies provide a possibility to enhance their talents in different fields,

besides

academic studies.

For example

, it is well-known fact that universities arrange various activities

such

a basketball or football. Many

students

have experienced the advantage of

this

program, which help them to become a professional athlete

such

as Michael Jordan or Michael Oher. To conclude, it is undoubtedly that the main issue of

education

is to get a better career in the

future

and become

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, I do believe that other

university

opportunities

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also

beneficial for them. In my point of view,

students

should have a devote time not only for

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academic study

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but

also

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extracurricular activities.