Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define and what factors contribute to achieving happiness?
In
this
present world, there is a higher number of persons trying to define what happiness
is. Even too many people have written books around this
subject, with magical's formulas to achieve it. However
, I consider that hapiness
is difficult to define because it is Correct your spelling
happiness
very
personal question, everyone Add an article
a very
have
things that make them happy. In consequence, try to define specific Change the verb form
has
factors
contribute
to Correct pronoun usage
that contribute
get
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getting
the
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happiness
is also
complicated because depend from
each person.
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First
, talk about happiness
as a global concept is almost imposible
, the Correct your spelling
impossible
most close
meaning that I can say is Change the adjective
closest
happiness
is doing things that makes
you smile Change the verb form
make
frecuently
. Correct your spelling
frequently
For instance
, few people feel great when they are alone, with nobody around. But also
we find people who enjoy beeing
full of friends around. In their condition both persons will be smiling, Correct your spelling
being
then
happiness
is beeing
alone or Correct your spelling
being
beeing
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being
accompained
. It is an individual matter. In consequence, try to define what Correct your spelling
accompanied
happiness
is, it's a hard activity.
Second
, consider that exist some general factors
to achieve the hapinness
is almost as complicated as trying to define it. Correct your spelling
happiness
For example
, for some young adults
a factor to achieve Add a comma
,adults
the
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apply
happiness
could be having a family with a wife and some kids; but someone could preffer
having a family with their parents and a pet. In both Correct your spelling
prefer
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cases
case
we can say that having a family could be a factor to be happy. But it depends Add a comma
,case
of
what a family is for each Change the preposition
on
one
. To resume, even if we find similar factors
, we still having troubles
when we define those elements.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
trouble
although
everyone in the world wants to be happy it is no easy to explaine
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explain
happiness
in one
common definition. As I explained before, each one
have
their own definition of Change the verb form
has
this
. In the same way, the factors
which contributes
to Change the verb form
contribute
achieve
itChange the verb form
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,
varies from each Remove the comma
apply
one
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