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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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 increase
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 the gross outcomes in
agricultural
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 field due to the
developement
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development
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technology and science over the
last
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centuries
, some people cannot access
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the
prosperties
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properties
, still surviving in poverty with a shortage of eats. The hungry individuals rarely seek
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decent jobs because
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 domestic economy cannot afford to create those by itself and are employed as temporary workers with
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severely low wages for the vast
farms
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farm's
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 companies run by the massive amount of
capitals
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 from advanced nations, which pursue always the highest profit margins. To rescue the low-income citizens for their better lives, the consumers should change their purchasing
habbits
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habits
 more morally and valuably. The capitalistic principles make serious troubles often in undeveloped societies where they have few factories and companies as the locals there cannot escape from their disastrous lives because of a lack of everyday necessities
such
 as meals and drinks. Mostly, they work hard for their whole days physically without
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 level of skills, but the employers reward very small
amount
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 of paychecks to lower their costs of
manufactural
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 processes and achieve
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price
competiveness
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competitiveness
 in the markets.
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teenagers have been engaged in the field for the
last
 decades with the lowest wage
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 the world. The more they
focuss
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focus
 on their work at the moment, the more they are trapped in the
hungers
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. To eradicate or decline the frightening situations, the educated costumers of the firms and citizens in the developed societies should contribute to
practicing
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 fair trades between the large scales of corporations and the
farms
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 employees as well as between the wealthy and the penury states.
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, tons of students and professors have participated in the public campaign spreading fair commerces for the
appropreate
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appropriate
 salaries to the poor workers in East Timor.
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, they have gotten to earn
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 higher income than before the movement, but
also
 could buy enough
foods
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. To sum up, we are all in the developed communities responsible for the poverty problems in
far away
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 tribes from these continents.
Therefore
, the consumers and firms should
helpin
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help
 the people to escape from the severe conditions
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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