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The maps No changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1960 to now.

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The maps demonstrate developments that have taken place in
Meadowside
village
 and
Fonton
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Font on
, a
neighboring
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 town, since 1962. On the
first
map
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 it’s a
village
 in 1962, on
second
 in 1985 and on
third
in
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 present. Overall, both the
village
 and town had a significant expansion over the period and now are joined. In 1962 it was the biggest distance between towns. There was a road in
Meadowside
 running from south-west to the north while in
Fonton
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Font on
 was a railway from south-east to the north-west. By 1985 both areas grew a lot. The road had been twice extended and led to the town. The superstore, housing estate and leisure complex were built in the west of the
village
. Nowadays,
Fonton
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Font on
 and
Meadowside
 are connected. Hotel in the north, station in the
center
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 and business park in the south were constructed on the former empty piece of land. Housing estate had been replaced closer to a road. The rail line was
also
 twice extended leading to the station.
Furthermore
,
Meadowside
 is renamed from the
village
 to suburb.
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