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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#future #cars #buses #trucks #driverless #people #vehicles #passengers
Technology and
Internet
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 of things (
IOT
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IoT
) are developing at an unprecedented rate. Many applications of
such
 advancements are already in use and have proven great efficacy, while others are still being tested. Many people believe that
driverless
vehicles
 will be an application achieved in the future. I believe that the advantages of
an
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innovation like
this
 would outweigh the disadvantages.
Driverless
 automobiles can reduce human errors, and
thus
 decrease unfortunate
accidents
. A recent study performed by BMW Cars' company proved that most car
accidents
 are due to human errors based on burnout, exhaustion, not enough sleep, anger, alcoholism and distractions. While many can argue that
such
 errors could be avoided if drivers took another form of
trasport
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transport
instead
 of driving in these conditions, there are many occasions where public transport won't be available nor sufficient.
As a result
,
driverless
vehicles
 could cut down on many car
accidents
.
In addition
 to
this
,
driverless
vehicles
 can provide humans with more
time
 to spend on other important activities. In Japan, a new
fully-automated
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car-line
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car line
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 was released in 2019. On testing, it has been reported from customers that they were able to use the transporting
time
 in beneficial activities like; reading books, preparing a presentation or calling some
aquaintances
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 on the way.
This
 proves that automated
vehicles
 can substitute driving
time
 with free
time
 for people's use. Conclusively, advancements in technology are witnessing a rapid positive trend.
Thus
,
driverless
vehicles
 are an achievable innovation in the foreseeable future. Reducing traffic
accidents
 and providing passengers with extra
time
 are advantages that support
this
 invention. It's undeniable that
driverless
vehicles
 will be helpful more than harmful to humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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