It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the opportunity has become available for

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and

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to travel to distant natural

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. In my opinion, I tend to believe that travelling these

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can bring about more problems compared to advantages it might bring.

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the one hand, travelling to remote natural

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has some benefits.

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,

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and

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can discover new things about nature. Since the South

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has not been completely discovered due to its climate, it provides an opportunity for

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to learn interesting things about its environment.

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, a different sky vision can be seen only in

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which many

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and

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are willing to see. Availability of

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for

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and

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is a good experience.

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, being able to travel to remote

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tourists

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can experience life in different conditions.

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, the temperature in the south

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is usually cold and having an adventure under extreme conditions is a great experience for some people.

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, despite the advantages above, I believe people could face serious drawbacks from travelling those

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. One potentially dangerous problem is that the temperature of the south

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is usually below -10 degrees, and that would probably create some possible serious health risks for

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and

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. Making a decision to travel

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with low

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will probably put

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and

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into

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big trouble. Another evident issue is that

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many vehicles

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as helicopters and their communications systems have failed to work in

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would probably bring about life-threatening situations if not prepared beforehand. In conclusion, despite some benefits of travelling to isolated natural

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. I tend to believe that the disadvantages of travelling

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far outweigh the advantages.