It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the opportunity has become available for

tourists

and

scientists

to travel to distant natural

areas

. In my opinion, I tend to believe that travelling these

areas

can bring about more problems compared to advantages it might bring.

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the one hand, travelling to remote natural

areas

has some benefits.

Firstly

,

scientists

and

tourists

can discover new things about nature. Since the South

Pole

has not been completely discovered due to its climate, it provides an opportunity for

scientists

to learn interesting things about its environment.

For example

, a different sky vision can be seen only in

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pole

which many

tourists

and

scientists

are willing to see. Availability of

such

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for

tourists

and

scientists

is a good experience.

Secondly

, being able to travel to remote

areas

tourists

can experience life in different conditions.

In other words

, the temperature in the south

pole

is usually cold and having an adventure under extreme conditions is a great experience for some people.

On the other hand

, despite the advantages above, I believe people could face serious drawbacks from travelling those

areas

. One potentially dangerous problem is that the temperature of the south

pole

is usually below -10 degrees, and that would probably create some possible serious health risks for

scientists

and

tourists

. Making a decision to travel

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areas

with low

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will probably put

tourists

and

scientists

into

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big trouble. Another evident issue is that

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many vehicles

such

as helicopters and their communications systems have failed to work in

such

areas

.

This

would probably bring about life-threatening situations if not prepared beforehand. In conclusion, despite some benefits of travelling to isolated natural

areas

. I tend to believe that the disadvantages of travelling

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areas

far outweigh the advantages.