Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
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these dangerous activity
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being the "Center of attraction" to become famous and rich.
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However
, there are various steps that can be taken to solve this
problem. Firstly
, government
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the government
those activity
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those activities
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, in the United States, some type of boxing that are not only harmful to the sports
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promote violence amongst viewers. Secondly
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a documentary
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...