Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places

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world has been become

global

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village due to fast , safe

transpotations

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transportation

transportations

and communication. People can travel in

extream

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extreme

weather

such

as

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cold Antarctic or and very hot deserts for adventure, research and science experiments. There are some merits and

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demerits

of excess

touristism

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tourism

tourists

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the areas, we would discuss here in

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essay.

Firstly

,

Antarctis

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Antarctic

known

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under hard weather

that is

very cold. Normally,

temperature

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the temperature

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of the area

remain

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-40 degree to -60 degrees. It is almost impossible to live under

this

weather for human

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beings

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but strangely some animals like

penguns

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penguins

and sea animals are living, surviving and reproducing there.

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is

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amazing and

this

is an attraction for tourists and scientists. Research on

Penguns

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Penguins

revealed that they are living in groups. They

lives

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with family and reproduce children and

stuggle

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struggle

for food like

human

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being.

Secondly

, due to excess tourism, waste materials are accumulating over there. Most of

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are not

biodegradalbe

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biodegradable

bio degradable

and concenquencely, pollution is increasing.

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if

pengun

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penguin

penguins

eat

these

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waste, it can be dangerous for their life.

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used for

scientfic

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scientific

experiments may lead to

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for animal

habitants

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habitats

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.

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Further more

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, Living animals can

disturbe

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disturb

disturbed

with frequent

interfernce

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interference

of

human

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a human

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being

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beings

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. Adversely,

Wild

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the Wild

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animal

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animals

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may attack

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tourist

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tourists

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or lead to

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risk too. In the conclusion, It is essential to do

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researchs

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research

and discoveries on

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natural

habitants

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habitats

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.

Tourist

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have to right for

statisfaction

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satisfaction

of their excitement to see the nature closely. Tourist should be limited their visits and governments should apply

with

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strict rules and regulations restrict

unnesseary

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unnecessary

travel of area.