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Some people think that watching sport is waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, sports have earned countless
of
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viewers all around the world like never before.
However
, some reckon it is a wastage of leisure
time
 for
people
 who watch
sport
. I agree to some extent with that statement and
this
 article shall explain why.
To begin
 with, the majority of
people
 who contemplate
sport
 are usually admirers of a team or an athlete. Being a long
time
 and loyal fan might be the reason why they have
such
 passion for these recreational activities. They consider it as a part of their life as if they were to worship a god. That instilled passion drives them to always follow their favourite clubs or athletes.
For example
, Ronaldo and Messi have an unbelievable fan base and Manchester United and Real Madrid have the most supporters on the planet. That said, sports can be considered to form part of many
people
's lives.
Nevertheless
, admiration can become an obsession. Many individuals tend to spend
excessive
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 amount of
time
 on their favourite game.
As a result
, it leads them to waste a lot of
time
 and energy in vain where they could have used them to do something productive. Being a fan is not a problem but there must be a limit. These moments could be
also
 dedicated to oneself where talents and skills could be developed.
Secondly
, these precious hours could be spent
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learning and performing a
sport
.
For instance
, in my locality, there are football matches that are organised for the local
people
 each week.
Therefore
, enjoying oneself by doing some physical activities could be an alternative. In conclusion, it cannot be denied that someone can be a
sport
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 viewer but it must not become an obsession. Leisure
time
 must be used wisely and always ask yourself if you are being productive or not.
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