You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Rutab

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, I am a health care professional. Recently, I have seen an advert on Facebook regarding an English course at your school. It is available overseas as well. I would like to study English at your school so that I can improve my international Language. which is necessary for my professional growth. I have two major concerns.

Firstly

, I want a separate room for accommodation with an attached bath. If you can arrange a studio apartment for me, as it would be more comfortable. Actually, being the only child of my parents I always have a separate room. So it would be difficult for me to focus on my studies If I have to share a room with another student. I won't mind paying extra money for

this

In addition

, it should be near to my accommodation because I have to walk to reach the school.

secondly

, I strictly follow vegetarian recipes because I am allergic to milk and fish since birth. If you allow I would prefer to cook food for myself so that I can be extra careful. I look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully,

Rutab

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Rub

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