While on a business trip in another city, you met an old friend who lives there. You are going on another business trip to this city soon and would like to see him/her again. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •tell him/her about your trip; •say why you were happy to see him/her; •suggest an arrangement for you to meet.
Dear Sam,
I’m writing
this
letter to just let you know that I’m coming to your town to see you as well as
for business reasons.
Recently, I was planning to expand my company to other provinces. Hence
, I need to visit the rental office space physically and the owner of the property because my company’s products are needed by consumers around this
country. Hence
, this
time
I’m visiting your town in the coming week. In addition
, I will be staying in one of the most prestigious hotels in your city.
Furthermore
, I felt worried the last
time
when I saw you because I had a limited amount of time
to speak with you. Fortunately, this
time
I allocated a separate leisure time
for us in my schedule. So, we can talk to each other and we can discuss our old golden memories.
Finally
, I would like to share some recommended ways to see you. First,
we can meet in one of the esteemed restaurants in your town in the evening, or else you can also
come to my hotel room after 6pm. Therefore
, we can spend time
privately without any disturbance.
I hope you can understand my suggestions and look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
KumarSubmitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Your letter is well-organized and clear, ensuring that each paragraph presents a distinct idea related to the purpose of the letter.
Task Achievement
Make sure to check for minor typos and grammatical inconsistencies, as improving these could enhance the clarity and professionalism of your writing.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using varied and more complex sentence structures to further enrich your writing and better engage the reader.
Task Achievement
You effectively communicated the purpose of your trip, your desire to meet, and proposed specific arrangements for the meeting, demonstrating a good understanding of the task.
Coherence & Cohesion
The logical structure of your letter allows for easy reading, with each paragraph dedicated to a specific aspect of your message.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite