Some people think that it is difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people call for easier access to universities for

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with a humble background. While it may give more chances for certain kinds of pupils, I personally reckon that

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will have serious negative impacts on both society and individuals.

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of all, special treatments for disadvantaged

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in college admission can undermine social justice since it is hard to give a clear demarcation of family status and the extent of reduction in requirements.

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fuzzy boundary not only adds troubles in enrollment decisions

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provides some opportunistic people with

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to take

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for their own interests. These well-off families may pretend to be poor or find ways to change their domicile address to rural areas, in order to increase possibilities of being admitted,

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making the

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bring no actual benefit to the real helpless children and

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increasing the gap between rich and poor. Meanwhile, some hard work candidates from cities may be rejected compared with appliers from

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even though they have better performance in high school, which can only stir up social controversy and disturb the equality in

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a widely-concerned social issue.

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, for the individuals’ sake, the simpler entrance to tertiary education will restrict personal development, in terms of knowledge acquisition and self-confidence. The

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with less knowledge base will find it hard to keep pace with the teaching progress in universities that are designed for the majority of undergraduates that have

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learning experience in the past, supporting them with more effective techniques and capability to study. These incompetent

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will

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meet obstacles to cooperate with other

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,

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, when finishing group assignments, leading to less social contact with others

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with classmates and the lower scores in courses unconsciously blow to their confidence in personal abilities, exerting a long-term and irreversible influence on their future life, which is much worse than

lower-level

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college education.

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, the

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indeed were formerly held back by their family condition can gain a chance to change their destinies and social classes, since

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protective

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giving them

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academic atmosphere and resources to

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their talent to the full. Those with great curiosity in learning and perseverance have

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potential to catch up

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peers in their universities’ lives, for the simple reason that they are previously limited by the hard access to efficient learning

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as a lack of latest books and advanced equipment, rather than their own abilities or intelligence. In these cases, the caring consideration in admission can

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be regarded as

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to improve social mobility to some extent. In conclusion, the drawbacks of making

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easy access to higher education for disadvantaged

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outweigh its benefits to just a limited number of pupils.