In many cities the construction of new houses and office buildings is not controlled. This leads to people building in whatever style they want without thinking about design. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is important for people to decide in which type and style of accommodation they want to live and work in.
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according to their wishes and local government planners are not involved in these constructions. While some believe that Use synonyms
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is the space in a home. One can build a home according to his family needs and required room number. In Pakistan, Linking Words
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, there are big families comprising of 4 to 6 persons, and all need their own rooms and privacy. Another point to consider is the human nature of owning unique things. The different designs are a mark of their own personality and character revealed in the specific design of the construction. Linking Words
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, positives of space and privacy and own mark is essential features, the negatives of monetary misuse and loss of the city’s traditional style are not negligible.
In terms of negatives, in my view, monetary misuse and loss of the city’s traditional style are essential. The main point is that building huge residences can result in a competition of making grand designs between citizens. Citizens with big revenues Linking Words
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as businessmen want to show off their wealth and to do so they invest in luxurious homes not only interiorly but with the extravagant exterior as well. Adding to Linking Words
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is the loss of the region's identity which is a threat to the cultural heritage of a country. If everyone will construct huge Remove the comma
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different from one another, the originality of that area will be lost. It will be more of a museum with sight-seeing showpieces but culturally an unknown city.
To conclude, houses with grand designs and beautiful architecture are the right of every homeowner. The positives of space for family and owners imprint on the property is , Use synonyms
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, in my view, outweighed by the negatives of monetary exploitation in building distinct houses and damage of cultural relics of a city.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite