Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Since
people
try
there
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best to live in
comfortable
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,
cozy
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and
well- equipped
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place, they face
difficult
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choice between living in an apartment and living in a
house
. As both options have advantages and disadvantages
this
pick becomes very popular in our modern society.
This
essay will show which pluses and minuses exist when
people
prefer to live in a
house
to living in a flat.
To begin
with, those
people
who live in their
house
have much more privacy. They do not need to worry about disturbing their
neighbors
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due to a big distance between private territories.
Therefore
the
neighbors
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also
are not able to distract, no matter how noisy they are.
Moreover
, the group of
people
who loves to plant flowers, bushes or some other kind of plans, definitely would be happy to
has
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their own yard around a residence. Obviously, living in a
house
is more suitable for families with kids, old
people
who want to live in peace and
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quite
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and those
people
, that seek to live privately.
Although
,
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living in a
house
has many advantages, there are some disadvantages, that I want to note.
Firstly
, holding a
house
is expensive nowadays.
In other words
, fees for electricity, gas and water are costlier than
people
pay while they are living in an apartment.
Secondly
, young
people
who are too busy with their studying or work just do not have enough time to maintain a
house
.
For instance
, students, employees or those members of society, who live alone would prefer a small flat for rent to settle down in a
house
. To sum up, there is a fact that both variants are equally demanded due to
an
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extremely successful construction and sale of both properties.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, living in a
house
outweighs
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living in an apartment, because previously mentioned advantages are more vital for me.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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