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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that school teaches children a skill but others think having a range of subjects is better for the children's future. Discuss both sides.

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In the midst of
this
 technology-driven global world, education and skills play an important role in deciding the progress of children's
future
. Each and every parent wish to give their best for their children,not only curriculum activities
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but
also
 extracurricular activities. Admittedly, some people are thinking that minimum of one skill,children should get to learn from
school
 ,
however
 , others have an opinion that for better
prospective
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 they should learn different verity of the
subject
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views with their benefits. On the one hand, kids are going to
school
 to learn new things for their better
future
 by securing a good job. All guardians want their kids to get good schooling, for that, they are ready to spend even more money. Apparently , teaching only academic things won't help all the graduates to reach their goals and succeed in their life. So, they should get to know what skills they have and in which field they are interested . Only teachers can help them to train their skills,in which they are interested .
As a result
 , they will just blow in
future
 without any hurdles.
On the other hand
,even though, it is always better to know the huge
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 of subjects from a young age,
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pupil
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 get more knowledge about various subjects. At the same time, after the basics, students should get the freedom to choose the
subject
 in which they want to study and make a
future
.
otherwise
 , it will be an additional burden for them to study unwanted or uninterested things,which will simply be screwed up their time. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, if a kid has a special skill , the
school
 should support it and help to reach as top as they can.
Similarly
 , having more range of subjects
also
 help students to get to know more about each
subject
 and they can decide with which
subject
 they should choose to achieve their goal
hence
 the can have a better
future
.
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