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As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?

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It is true that when
children
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 grow up , their social
behaviour
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 will alter in some ways . Compared with the social
behaviour
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 of
adults
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, there are many differences in those of
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our venture
. When
children
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 become
adults
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 , they will change significantly for many reasons. The external effect is
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 influencing factors to their
behaviour
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.
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 , they will be affected by an event that has occurred in the community or
basicly
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basically
 their
behaviour
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 change due to the child's emotional development and temperament. There are many differences between the social
behaviour
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 of
adults
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 and
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children
childrens
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children
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. Kids won’t be able to communicate like
adults
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.
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, adult society is wider and bigger than
children
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's . They have access to a lot of
culture
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,people with many characters so their
life
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 perspectives are
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 different meanwhile kid social
life
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 is around school and family.
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 ,
children
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 will easily make friends and think nothing of it.
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 ,older people are much more sophisticated , when they see someone for the
first
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 time they will focus on the good impression. At the same time ,
adults
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 have matured people who easily face many problems in their
life
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. They have more
life
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 experience than young toddlers .
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 , they earn themselves and take responsibilities in their
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 with a happy face , unlike teenagers Sometimes when
children
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 get older. the changes make their
behaviour
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 tend to be bad . They feel that they can do everything and
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, it contributes to the generating of the feeling of tremendous brashness.
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, as they become
adults
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,
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 process inculcates them to garner new
life
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 experiences in mankind. In conclusion , there
are
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 so many
difference
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differences
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 in
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behaviour
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the behaviour
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 of
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a toddler
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toddler
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toddlers
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 and a mature
person
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people
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 like they have less experience than
adults
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 . These changes when
children
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 get older will help them have more experience and
know
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 about worldview.
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