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Some people believe it is better to complete graduation to get a job while others believe having experience and skills is important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #graduation #job #skills
In today's competitive world it is essential to have
job
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. In order to get employment, one must
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have
basic
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a basic
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 academic
qualification
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qualifications
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, whereas others refute
this
 idea, stating that only practical
knowledge
 is more important.In
this
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 we will discuss that graduation provides
knowledge
 whereas
experience
 provides skills.
Higher level
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 education provides extensive
knowledge
 in various
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subjects
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subject
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 to students.
The academic
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knowledge
 enables
human
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 mind to acquire specialized skill sets to perform
jobs
.
This
 is
illustarted
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illustrated
 that people who have their majors in accounts are better in
finanaces
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finances
finance
 compared to those who do not have
background
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 in accounts.If students do not go for graduation they lack command
in
particular
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 field irrespective of their
knowledge
 in the sector. Studying helps to improve their learning and provide
edge
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an edge
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 for getting better
jobs
 opportunity over others who do not have
academic
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an academic
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qualification
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qualifications
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. It is evident that in
jobs
 people need to work
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field
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 rather than theoretically.
On
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field
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experience
 promotes
practical
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the practical
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 application of task which needs to be performed.In recent
studies
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 it has been seen that roadside car mechanics have more competency than automobile
engineer
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engineers
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 to check and repairs old cars. The practical
tranining
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training
 helped them to learn more. If
task
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 is not applied
then
 it does not have
suitable
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a suitable
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 impact on
jobs
.
Therefore
,
experience
 and skill training has
outmost
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 importance for getting
jobs
. In conclusion, the academic qualification is very important to sharpen the brain with hand on
tarining
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training
 and
experience
. It can be said that an amalgamation of practical
knowledge
 and degree have added advantage to get
job
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a job
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.
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