Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I would agree to the far extent with the statement that tourists from overseas should outlay more money than green card holders of a province.
Firstly
, tourism is the backbone of
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development for several countries.
For instance
,
places
such
as Bali and Thailand are the heart of tourist destinations. That being said, non-residents travel to these areas for recreational purposes.
However
, if the prices to visit old monuments and historical
places
become relatively higher than the citizens, it might discourage
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of
travelers
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to visit a certain country. But as a resident of a place, there should be a certain priority to be accumulated to benefit from their
birth place
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. Not only are the
citizens
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taxpayers
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but
also
contribute to the reconstruction and preservation of their traditional
places
Secondly
, Foreigners need to
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bare
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in mind the cost of educating themselves about an area. The
purposes
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of
traveling
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is
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not only to relax but to engage
into
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a new culture
aswell
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as well
as investing in them. To illustrate
this
, overseas visitors may buy souvenirs, clothes and so forth.
This
will play a significant role
on
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the growth of the country as
tourist
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industry is one of the highest income for most countries. To conclude, attraction
places
of a certain area should charge more for a different nationality than the locals. Visitors should be able to benefit a country indirectly by purchasing cultural items and going to historical
places
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an extra cost.
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