In advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Currently, companies give a lot of emphasis on the specifications of their latest products in their advertisements. In
this
essay, I will be discussing the reasons why
this
is the case and the negative impact it implies before arriving at a conclusion. One reason is that people cannot allocate their money for proper use. If a well-known developer prepares a luxurious product release party, people will think that
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requirement for them to secure a slot. Apple Inc.,
for instance
, releases iPhone products bi-yearly and advertise
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extravagantly that buyers will think that it is essential to
purchase
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the latest model. They even camp outside of stores just to be the
first
in line. Because of
this
, the money of consumers will be used for purchasing unessential items,
instead
of payment for utility bills and other priorities.
In addition
, consumers fall
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the trap of false advertisements given by companies.
For example
, a brand will exaggerate the presentation of their so-called improved bag from their latest collection, but in
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they just added one compartment. The public, in turn, will be purchasing
this
with high expectations but in reality, nothing much has changed.
Consequently
,
this
would be detrimental not only for the businesses but
also
for the buyers. The credibility of the former suffers due to negative reviews and the latter
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their money
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waste. In summary, sellers often advertise give emphasis on the minimal changes on their merchandise or services. I strongly believe that
this
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that
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advantages
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.
This
is because people will not be able to diversify their expenses.
Additionally
, it can pose
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impact to both because of expectations from advertisements.
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