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Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

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Since the covid 19 has begun spreading globally, the vast majority of fatality has dramatically ramped up over 4 million, and more than 205 million infected cases
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 been reported around the
world
.
However
, the consequences of the pandemic bring about suspending anthropogenic, which is disastrous activities of
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 for
environment
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. In
this
 essay, I will explore the pros and cons of the contagious disease called “Covid-19”and try to make a conclusion. Economy,
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, and industry across the
world
 has been collapsed due to the pandemic,
people
 across the
world
 have to stop
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 or staying at home in order to control the spread of covid 19.
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transportation has been considerably decreased resulting in
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 greenhouse gases emission.
Moreover
, the natural tourist places have been revitalized because
people
 cannot travel outside as
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 measure of government.
Although
 there are some benefits in the impact of Covid 19 associated with the environment,
people
 are facing
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the
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difficulty
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 securing their life, which contributes to
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 physically and mentally health due to lengthy quarantine, the closure of shopping
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malls
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,
restaurant
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restaurants
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,
school
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, and so on. Many businesses have been collapsed, which lead to
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 amount of unemployed
people
. The most important is that many
people
 have
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 to the tragedy because they
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 their family members, and friends without arranging the funeral. In conclusion, the disadvantageous
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implication
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 of the transmissible virus outnumber the
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 in my point of view.
This
 disease has killed numerous amounts of
people
, and deteriorate all
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businesses
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.
Therefore
, covid-19 should be eradicated as soon as possible to bring back the
world
 happiness again.
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