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Since the covid 19 has begun spreading globally, the vast majority of fatality has dramatically ramped up over 4 million, and more than 205 million infected cases
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, the consequences of the pandemic bring about suspending anthropogenic, which is disastrous activities of
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. In
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essay, I will explore the pros and cons of the contagious disease called “Covid-19”and try to make a conclusion. Economy,
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, and industry across the
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has been collapsed due to the pandemic,
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across the
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have to stop
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or staying at home in order to control the spread of covid 19.
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transportation has been considerably decreased resulting in
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greenhouse gases emission.
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, the natural tourist places have been revitalized because
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cannot travel outside as
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measure of government.
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there are some benefits in the impact of Covid 19 associated with the environment,
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difficulty
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securing their life, which contributes to
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physically and mentally health due to lengthy quarantine, the closure of shopping
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,
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,
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, and so on. Many businesses have been collapsed, which lead to
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amount of unemployed
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. The most important is that many
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to the tragedy because they
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their family members, and friends without arranging the funeral. In conclusion, the disadvantageous
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of the transmissible virus outnumber the
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in my point of view.
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disease has killed numerous amounts of
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, and deteriorate all
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businesses
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, covid-19 should be eradicated as soon as possible to bring back the
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happiness again.
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