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Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, studying in
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 essential for childer because of their future career that they want to do as an adult.
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 among people about curriculums. some beliefs, there several
skills
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 like mathematics and philosophy which are hard to learn for some student and those are not mandatory for all while the others like me disagree with them. On the one hand, some
lessons
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 like that mention above are fundamental
skills
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 not only in
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 but
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 vital for all people in daily
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. Mathematical knowledge is necessary for improve
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 logical thinking skill that we need it on different aspects of
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 like our career or make a decision in critical sercomistances.
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, philosophy has been a vital part of human
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 entire history.
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, it is one of the fundamental
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 that we should deal with in program schools.
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, all pupils do not have the same ability to learn and even some of them do not like some
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 like math at all.
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, based on expertise investigation, when children opt
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 favourite lesson, they are
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this
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skills
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 and can get more band
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. Dispute, if children are not learned those
neccesery
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necessary
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 necessary skill( that I mention it in
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 paragraph) may they face to
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 problem on their future
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. in conclusion,
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 children like to study some easier or favourable
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, they need to learn mathematic and philosophy in
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. So, in my idea, these
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 should be compulsory before high
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 but the curriculum should be more attractive for pupils.
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