Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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essential for childer because of their future career that they want to do as an adult.
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among people about curriculums. some beliefs, there several
skills
like mathematics and philosophy which are hard to learn for some student and those are not mandatory for all while the others like me disagree with them. On the one hand, some
lessons
like that mention above are fundamental
skills
not only in
school
but
also
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vital for all people in daily
life
. Mathematical knowledge is necessary for improve
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logical thinking skill that we need it on different aspects of
life
like our career or make a decision in critical sercomistances.
In addition
, philosophy has been a vital part of human
life
entire history.
hence
, it is one of the fundamental
skills
that we should deal with in program schools.
On the other hand
, all pupils do not have the same ability to learn and even some of them do not like some
lessons
like math at all.
in addition
, based on expertise investigation, when children opt
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favourite lesson, they are
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skills
and can get more band
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. Dispute, if children are not learned those
neccesery
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necessary
skills
necessary skill( that I mention it in
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paragraph) may they face to
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problem on their future
life
. in conclusion,
although
children like to study some easier or favourable
lessons
, they need to learn mathematic and philosophy in
school
. So, in my idea, these
lessons
should be compulsory before high
school
but the curriculum should be more attractive for pupils.
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