Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons and disadvantages of this trend?

The world is changing a lot than the previous time, and people's living standards are improving.
Therefore
, many people choose to live differently versus their parents, and marrying lately or having
children
later is different. There are some reasons to lead
this
phenomenon and
also
bring the adverse effect to
society
.
Firstly
, the youth live in a modern and peaceful, safer world in the period of their parents who may suffer in war.
Therefore
, the young generation does not pressure to give birth to create the
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for servicing the
country
.
For instance
, my grandmother had ten
children
, and more a half of them died in the military, but in my mother's generation, each family has two or three kids and no more.
Secondly
,
women
have received an education equally with men, so they have many purposes of achieving success in career paths, following their dreams, etc. Girls are not limited anymore about being a standard mother to fit
society
's standards or having more opportunities to get higher education.
On the other hand
,
this
trend causes some disadvantages for
women
and
society
. Having
children
lately will cause some dangerous consequences for
women
's health.
Besides
, the worst thing is many
women
are unable to be pregnant after forty years old. To illustrate
this
, my cousin's sister had to receive a child from other
women
because she was forty-two at that time, and she had no the ability to give a baby by herself.
Furthermore
,
this
trend makes the families have one child because of their age, which leads to the
country
's decreasing population. Japan is the
country
that is
facing the lowest rate of young employees in their history; they have to make many benefits to encourage families to have more
children
. In conclusion, some factors lead to the trend of deciding to have
children
later in
society
, and it impacts few negative aspects for each woman and the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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