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Today, the high sales of ppopular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The controversial issue concerning whether the high
sales
 of popular
goods
 reflect the
power
 of advertising or the real need of
the
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society has attracted huge public attention and sparked a heated debate. Personally, I agree that the high
sales
 of popular
goods
 reflect the
power
 of advertising and
that is
 because in our day to day life we buy a lot of
goods
 only based on the hype about that product and not because we need them. I will explain my reasons in
this
 essay. One of the main causes of high
sales
 of popular
goods
 is because of the
power
 of advertising and not the real need of
the
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society.
People
 around the world just buy
products
 like shampoos, detergents,
sooap
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soap
soaps
 bars, beauty
products
 eg, makeup, lipstick etc based on only the
advertisements
 of the
products
 and not because they are in actual need of them. The situation is made worse by advertising campaigns
who
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 create attractive
advertisements
 that are
targetted
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targeted
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 at
people
 of all age groups,
adult
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adults
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, children. The results of a recent study in
US
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 shows that around the globe the
sales
 of
products
 are reaching extremities only because of powerful
advertisements
.
This
 is a huge problem as buying
goods
 based solely on
advertisements
 are
beneficiary
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 for the advertising companies but malign for the financial condition of
people
.
Therefore
, I have included the solution to
this
 problem in
this
 paragraph. One of the main ways to avoid being enticed by attractive
advertisements
 is to make a monthly necessity list and buying
products
 based on that .
This
 is a great way of knowing what is indeed required at our homes and how much we are spending
in
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 a monthly basis on certain
products
.
Therefore
, based on the viewpoints mentioned above, I hold the firm perspective that high
sales
 of
goods
is
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 mainly because of the
power
 of advertising. That's why
,
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 I
also
 believe that
people
 should adopt the solutions mentioned in
this
 essay. As that would help them from getting robbed by advertisement companies.
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