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Today, the high sales of ppopular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#sales #ppopular #goods #power #society
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The controversial issue concerning whether the high
sales
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 of popular
goods
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 reflect the
power
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 of advertising or the real need of
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society has attracted huge public attention and sparked a heated debate. Personally, I agree that the high
sales
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 of popular
goods
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 reflect the
power
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 of advertising and
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 because in our day to day life we buy a lot of
goods
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 only based on the hype about that product and not because we need them. I will explain my reasons in
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 essay. One of the main causes of high
sales
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 of popular
goods
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 is because of the
power
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 of advertising and not the real need of
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society.
People
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 around the world just buy
products
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 like shampoos, detergents,
sooap
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soap
soaps
 bars, beauty
products
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 eg, makeup, lipstick etc based on only the
advertisements
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 of the
products
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 and not because they are in actual need of them. The situation is made worse by advertising campaigns
who
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 create attractive
advertisements
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 that are
targetted
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targeted
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 at
people
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 of all age groups,
adult
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adults
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, children. The results of a recent study in
US
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the US
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 shows that around the globe the
sales
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 of
products
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 are reaching extremities only because of powerful
advertisements
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.
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 is a huge problem as buying
goods
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 based solely on
advertisements
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 are
beneficiary
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 for the advertising companies but malign for the financial condition of
people
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.
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, I have included the solution to
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 problem in
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 paragraph. One of the main ways to avoid being enticed by attractive
advertisements
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 is to make a monthly necessity list and buying
products
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 based on that .
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 is a great way of knowing what is indeed required at our homes and how much we are spending
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 a monthly basis on certain
products
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.
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, based on the viewpoints mentioned above, I hold the firm perspective that high
sales
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 of
goods
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is
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 mainly because of the
power
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 of advertising. That's why
,
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 I
also
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 believe that
people
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 should adopt the solutions mentioned in
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 essay. As that would help them from getting robbed by advertisement companies.
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