Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell: -what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff -how you feel about it -what suggestions you have.

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Dear Mr Rai, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
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letter in order to request you
for setting
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up a cafeteria for the staff. Let me explain in detail.
Last
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Friday
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having lunch, a few of the employees were discussing it. It is becoming extremely difficult for everyone to eat at their respective workstations.
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that, they are not been able to heat their food before eating.
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, people who travel from far locations are finding it extremely challenging to bring their own lunch.
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, they are surviving on junk food. Henceforth, I believe that a cafeteria is an extremely important requirement as
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a basic right for employees at the workplace.
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, as people are eating inside the working area ;
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, sometimes foul smell
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creates an adverse working environment.
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to that, for ,me it is extremely critical that we have some time at the office where we are outside our cabin.
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increases productivity. I would like to suggest if we can set up a small eating place on our office roof-top by covering it.
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, we can arrange for a catering service that can provide healthy food
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install a micro-oven.
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will give all the employees immense satisfaction. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya
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task response
Ensure that the letter provides more specific details about the inconvenience faced by the staff and how it affects their work productivity. This will enhance the task response.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate. However, consider providing a more personalized greeting and closing to enhance coherence and cohesion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inconvenience
  • dining options
  • negative impact
  • morale
  • productivity
  • well-being
  • feasibility
  • survey
  • interest
  • menu options
  • collaborating
  • local food vendors
  • diverse range
  • healthy and affordable
  • meal options
  • allocating
  • office building
  • spacious
  • essential amenities
  • microwaves
  • refrigerators
  • comfortable seating
  • long-term benefits
  • employee satisfaction
  • reduced downtime
  • fostering a sense of community
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