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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is undeniable that the world at the present has had changed into
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 technology community. Many people think that all vehicles in the future will be
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, and people will
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 be passengers only. From my point of view,
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 the vehicles which are
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 can offer advantages, there can present some serious drawbacks to
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society. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. On the one hand, one of the positive effects of self-driving
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 is that it is comfortable for the passengers, and it can reduce some road accidents.
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, in the evening
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 to go home, but they feel tried to drive
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 on
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 where are the traffic congestion,
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 crash issue. In that case, having
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self-driving
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 can cause some benefits to everybody who
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 using the
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 every day.
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, there can
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society
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car
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program developer of
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cars
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.
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self-driving
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 are often causing
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negative effects.
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, the
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 in Bangkok city, Thailand, have many potholes which are the obstacle for
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 vehicles due to the sensor of
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 cannot identify some potholes on the
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, resulting the
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 fall into a pothole at high speed and get into an accident. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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cars
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 can present both advantages and disadvantages to everybody in their society.
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, it is recommended that everyone should strictly follow the traffic rules
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. It seems to me that the advantages of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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