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The diagrams portray data about the stages and equipment of frozen
fish
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 pies production. Overall, the most striking point of
this
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 process is that the
fish
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 pies are put into microwaveable containers and consist of peas, sauce,
fish
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 and
potatoes
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.
To begin
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, the delivery brings
potatoes
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 less than
one month old
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one-month-old
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 to the factory. The
next
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 step is cleaning with water spray, peeling and cutting these vegetables and boiling them. After that
potatoes
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 chill for some time and store before wrapping all ingredients.
Subsequently
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, while
potatoes
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 go through all stages, the fresh salmon no more than 12 hours begins its way from adding lemon juice and salt. The
next
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 step is a steam oven, where salmon is cooked. Later
fish
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 is removed from skins and bones by staff and inspected. After that, salmon is prepared with peas and sauce and combined with
potatoes
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. The
last
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 step is wrapping mixes into microwaveable containers and freezing them before placing them into storage for delivery.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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