Not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to fix this problem?

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Every nation has its own
rules
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regulations by the government, and to the people to abide
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In
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of driving,the drivers do have certain
rules
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to be followed on
road
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,but few of them deter obeying it.
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,I believe there are possible reasons and
the
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effective measures for
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to be implied.
To begin
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,It is appropriate that some people break the laws on
road
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because of their improper schedule of
time
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and inconvenience on their travel.
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First
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and foremost reason is traffic congestion during peak hours that
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would induce them to go
overspeed
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while on vehicles.
That is
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to say,public drive upon by exceeding the speed limit than usual to reach their destination on
time
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.
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,some communities do not concede to wear
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helmet
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,when they travel on
bike
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a bike
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.
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,they feel wearing
helmet
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on heads is a burden to endure,and cause them more inconvenient while they ride on.
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,though many adults are conscious about their
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and law on
road
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,few youngsters are against putting on the head
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attire.
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,some individuals are not strictly following the
rules
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because of their lack of
time
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management and looking
on
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comfort. The possible measures can be adopted are
time
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schedule and self-awareness on
safety
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.Though many working professionals are sincere in their duty,they fail to be responsible on
road
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safety
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rules
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with their speed limit ,
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could be rectified by starting early to work from home.
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,adults and youths must be self-educated on necessities of using
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helmet
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a helmet
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,as it
protect
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them from hurts caused by
road
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accidents.To illustrate,one of my
friend
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met with
an
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bike accident
last
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month,
however
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,he got escaped with minor injuries on feet,and
fortunately
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nothing happened to him as he wore
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helmet
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a helmet
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on his head.Consecutively,wise planning and alert on
safety
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is
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more important to dissuade the loss of lives when people overrule the regulations. In conclusion,though traffic congestion and
public’s
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the public’s
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comfort are the causatives of the drivers to disobey the law,
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could be effectively solved by the proper
time
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scheduling and self-
resposibilities
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responsibilities
on
safety
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and life.
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