Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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There is no doubt
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day's many
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subjects are very difficult for
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while some
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tend to love learning math and philosophy. So, many parents claim that some subjects should be optional for their kids. I would have to support that idea and draw my personal opinion. On the one hand, many
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have different mental levels in primary schools.
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, prefer that subjects be choosable in the
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six years of
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, that will increase love learning and ability at the
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because there is no compulsion to study any subject can not understand it.
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, children in primary schools tend to be interested in the draw and arts rather than science and thinking materials. So, schools should not give junior difficult lessons during the
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years because play and arts can improve skills
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of lessons.
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, studying mathematic and philosophy
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virile science can grow up the brain and mental skills but the
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can not learn and get benefit from anything when did not like it or did not want.
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, there have many ways and professional places to learn math but stile
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can not understand that because there did not want.
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, child interest in what studying is the most significant. In conclusion, even though that many
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course is important to teach in the
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for
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but I believe that learning subject should be chosen by the
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because there who learn and know what want to be in the future.
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