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In multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural society outweigh the disadvantages?

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Because of globalization, more
people
 from different cultures get along with each other recently. I believe that the benefits of
this
 trend outweigh the drawbacks, and my reasons are threefold. One primary reason is the fact that living or working with
people
 of a variety of cultural backgrounds is
a
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 best way to gain a better understanding of the different traditional lifestyles.
People
 can learn about others traditions and customs
such
 as table manners, traditional values, and something should do or should not do in their culture.
Furthermore
,
people
 can learn about respecting cultural differences and enjoying cultural diversity which
also
 can broaden
people
's horizons. It might be claimed that there may be a language barrier between
people
 from a wide range of backgrounds.
However
, it is not a severe problem since after
people
 getting along with each other for a long time, they will be familiar with differences and may get bilingual skills for someone who specializes in learning languages.
Moreover
, it is
a
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 effective way to protect their cultural heritage since different culture is promoted to the globe. By way of conclusion,
although
 some maintain that living in a multi-cultural society is not beneficial, I believe that it brings lots of advantages to
people
.
For example
, knowing more about cultural diversity, esteeming different traditions and customs, and saving cultural heritage.
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