Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
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the music
music
sites
on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done toprevent
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to prevent
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of whether
music
sites
should be banned or not .
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sites
are a threat because they do not have the authencity
to produce Correct your spelling
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, They also
reveal a musician
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as well as the record label
they have contracts with. for instance
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music
album was not yet finished but the music
was already out in the public through the pirated sites
.
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Illegal
music
sites
need to be controlled becasue
they destroy the competitive spirit amongst musicians. Every Correct your spelling
because
musician
aspires to make as many albums as possible and give a boost to their career. It is impossible to do so since their hardwork
of making a good business is ruined since pirate Correct your spelling
hard work
sites
already declare the music
to the public. This
turns the recording label
and musician
downhearted since their hardwork
goes to waste. Correct your spelling
hard work
for instance
, a recording label
in india
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music
sites
who
had changed the lyrics of the song and the recording Correct pronoun usage
that
label
had to cough up money to pay to the original artiste.
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a threat to the businessmen involved in Correct your spelling
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